review, review
After Tuesdays review and reading and rereading my paper I realized that i need sooooooooooo much more help, so i have made my first appointment with the writhing center. so hopefully i can unlock one of those achievements , which like the points on Who's Line is it Anyway ? "where everything's made up and the points don't matter." but anyway i would like to say thanks to my group and KarateCarolyn for your "meat and potato" insights so i will take your comments and hopefully come back Monday with a revised rewrighten remarkable paper.
